Lincoln: Shut up, you loud-mouthed dope! This Fanfic is a MASSIVE critique on every fanfic that is targeting the Episode "No Such Luck" of the Western Animation Series "The Loud House." Also it is part Satire, so most of the behavior of the Characters appearing here may not be their usual self's. If you like all the Revenge-Fics who like to torment Lincoln's family and/or present his . While this Season 2 Loud House episode might not be as bad as 'Brawl in the Family' or 'No Such Luck,' it's up there. Most of the fanfictions involve Lynn being more unlikeable, they contain Luna and Leni feeling sympathy over Lincoln because the fanbase is mostly biased between the relationships between Lincoln and Luna and Leni and the fanfictions don't even fix the episodes . Lynn: (sighs) Who am I kidding? Re-Uniting With Lincoln by KingMercury254. The siblings were heard saying numerous phrases but they all pretty had the same topic, 'What did we do to get kicked out already?' "And," Lori said, as she approached her parents, "if you want to act like irresponsible teenagers. Rita: I guess this is what we get for selling all his stuff. (She sees the smashed trophy case and gasps). I would feel awful if you did. Leni was working, even though she wasn't even hired and what she was doing is illegal (author interruption: ok I know, to be fair, this is Leni we're dealing with and she means no trouble, but still, what she's doing is unreported employment, which is against the law, look it up if you don't believe me). ", Lincoln: "Lynn, don't say that. Lincoln: "Oh really." "I can't believe we didn't do that sooner," Lola responded back with, "She was nothing but an icky leech. "Which room number is it?" "Hotel security came up to the room?!" Learn more. Immediately, everyone started running or hiding to avoid getting caught in the crosshairs of their destruction. ", "Can I just say that I was only out there because I was accidentally locked out." (pauses for a few seconds) "Do you guys notlove me anymore? Hearing the guy mention 'the blonde girl in a green dress,' made them get even more nervous as they knew the girl he was referring to was their sister, Leni. We know we don't deserve it, but we hope you can forgive us! "Well mom, you know what I think?" Lincoln is running through town, sweating, panting, tearful and very thirsty. They sold his furniture and forced him to wear a squirrel costume to bring them good luck.) Lincoln: "Coming!" Lynn: *Gasp* NOOOOOO!!!!! Lana: You know, all of a sudden, I really hate myself! ", Lynn: 'Oh my gosh, you're right. he turned to the three men, who started sweating nervously, afraid of what would happen to them if they didn't say anything. Lori soon pulled out her phone and dialed Aunt Ruth's number. I feel like a fool!" Lynn Sr.: (with a broken voice) "And we were horrible parents to you, locking you out! In this Loud House Alternate universe a man made virus force's mankind to abandon earth.all except one 11 year old Lincoln Loud was accidentally abandoned by his parents and five sisters as an infant and was forced to fend for himself 11 years later Lincoln has adapted to his new hunting and gathering lifestyle and. Hope you enjoy. loud. They thought that if they did or said something that this man didn't like, he would turn them to stone with his glare. They knew they not only had the bill from the hotel to worry about, but also the possibility of getting sued. You're all insane!!! Can you please just come down here? I hate the fact that you never take responsibility! But this particular day, one of those children has been left out due to some "bad luck". We just thought you were bad luck, we didnt mean to upset you like this. Find out what other deviants think - about anything at all. After he said that, he finally saw his kids' faces and immediately started backing away, but the kids stomped forward, towards him and Rita and they completely surrounded them. Are you no longer grounded to the room?" (He gathers up a sleeping bag, pillow and snacks. Then you'll be treated like irresponsible teenagers." It's no fun without Lincoln! Even Ronnie Anne was there too. He even then flips over and smashes the trophy case. She walked into the spa and asked, in her usual ditzy tone, "Hey guys? ), Lincoln: (to the viewers) " I can't believe they actually locked me out the house, which is also my home. I certainly am not! Taking the device out of the girl's hand. Meatbrain here and her dumb softball, this never would have happened! "Nah, Aunt Ruth," Luna said, "you're gonna wanna listen to this." After a minute, "Hello," the gruff sound of their Aunt Ruth was heard. LYNN LOUD HITS A GRAND SLAM!!! ", Lincoln: "No. WE WENT TOO FAR!!! "WE HATE DOING ALL THOSE CHORES FOR YOU, YOU FILTHY SLOB!" IM hoping to show this to Nickelodeon themselves someday. Lori responded with, yelling the last few words. Okay this episode has already been hated enough you can pretty much type in the rants for 'No such luck' and there will be a lot of those, I too hated this e. Rita: Lincoln?! Sweaty Pants here! The kids, of course, still had some demands to give their parents. Leni asked, an eyebrow raised, confused. [Ronnie Anne handed Lincoln the card. Whenever the kids fought, they were scared, whenever the kids were angry at each other or one specific sibling, they were scared, but when all the kids were angry at something (in this case, them), they were terrified, because they knew something bad was going to happen. He really doesn't like us at all does he? "AND WE ESPECIALLY HATE HAVING TO LOOK AT THOSE BUNION INFESTED FEET OF YOURS! They were wondering how could this room be these three idiots, they were booked until tomorrow. Dont threaten your little sister! (turns his attention to Luna) "Luna, remember when we went to that SMOOCH concert? AND I'M GOING TO GET A RESTRAINING ORDER JUST TO KEEP YOU AWAY!" Post an update . Directors Kyle Marshall (segment Frog Wild) Chris Savino (segment No Such Luck) Writers Chris Savino Whats next? I will not be discarded and than used!! Lola: What if we get stung or bitten by a shark!? Need i remind you looneys that its against the law to not shelter one of your own and what am i supposed to do now that all my belongings are gone!? "Uuhhh," Luna started, unsure of how to start the conversation, "Hello, security dude. Rushing to the balcony door, he opened it, getting the girl's attention. Felix asked, "Can you tell me what exactly caused these kids to be kicked out?" ], Lincoln: Mom, Dad? "We don't have a hotel room anymore," Lincoln said, in a very angry tone that the parents weren't used to seeing. Hearing that caused everyone to become shocked, but they didn't know what to say. Rita: Okay Lincoln! I hate that you sold my bed and everything I had! helluvaboss. (He tears the costume off, leaving a very red and sweat-coated body in his wake. Except now I have to deal with the most annoying teasing that's ever existed. ", (the sisters cheers. His choreography is so dated. Lynn: NO! Opening the door slightly, Luna stuck her head out and saw a man, somewhere in his early 30's with Caucasian skin and short brown hair, wearing a security uniform. No Such Luck / Frog Wild. Lincoln: Happy Valentines Day, Ronnie Anne. ", Lucy: "We don't care, we'll watch anything you want. But the woman did, "That your parents were caught skinny dipping after hours? They wanted to comfort him, but they both knew that he would push them away. But right now, ive had it! This is a family moment. But I'm not entirelyinnocent myself." No self-insert oc this time. First, she got groans from her children and then Lola said, "What isn't wrong with Aunt Ruth?" And then, as quickly as it appeared, the noises disappeared. N Eddy's big picture show . I just got so mad, that I stopped thinking and gave him a stupid idea and made us all push him away and lose almost everything. Journal. (Meanwhile, back on the beach, the family has gathered together, feeling very ashamed and humiliated. Luna: That was rockin'. Luna: [Blushes] Really? I'm not. Lola: Me too! Then, he opened it up. When my so-called 'family' gets home, I'm gonna have a talk with them." (Tugs at it), (They tug and pull while the rest of the family backs away nervously). The parents shook their heads up and down rapidly and nervously, the thought of being arrested terrified them and they couldn't stand the thought of being separated from their kids. (pauses for a second) "You know what, I'll decide when we get there and see what movies are playing. I have failed as a human being. The End. First, if they are to go on vacation by themselves, they let the kids stay at home, second, they agree to bring swimwear and wear when going for a late night swim, three, if the place they stay at is great then they go there for a family vacation in the future and four, no more visits to Aunt Ruth's. Understood?!" ", Luna: "No, you were right. She's smarter than she looks and there's evidence canon in the show to prove it.). After one loss, she claims that Lincoln is bad luck. Not you or Lucy. (Lincoln picks up the head and jumps up and down on it several times.). SQUIRRELS WIN!" ), (It cuts to the main street. She also knew it wasn't about Jeffrey, the manager, because any reviews he gave to staff were done over a month ago. Baby Steps / Brawl in the Family. lincoln. Lincoln and the parents come up.]. And you better start talking now!". Status Update. So consider this as a fourth fanfic of mine. ), Lynn Sr.: "Get ready kids, we're going to the movies again, but Lincoln is coming with us. The important thing is that we learn from them. (The family submerge, coughing up water, covered in seaweed and muck, their sunnies, hats and sandals floating in the water and their swimsuits in tatters. You love baseball. kamenrider. They also saw Lori in the front seat, Lynn Sr. knocked on the window. Luna: I dont know. A Happy Ending New Reading List. I hate concerts! ", Lincoln: "Oh, and I'm sorry for breaking your golf clubs, Lori. ", Lincoln: (To his all sisters) "All thoseevents I attended, was I bad luck? But seriously, we made a mess of everything! I don't want you quit something you love because of me. The siblings began agreeing with that statement, but Lynn Sr. and Rita were frightened. While they were still upset about their parents' behavior and getting them kicked out of an awesome hotel, they understood why they did what they did and understood that they shouldn't had forced their parents to take them on their vacation. Lana: YOU DON'T WANT TO BE OUR BROTHER ANYMORE AND IT'S ALL OUR FAULT!!!! "Wait, what are you saying?" You don't care about me, you think I'm nothing, but a thing, you care about no one, but yourselves, you never wanted a boy, you don't have feelings, you all feel NOTHING ANYMORE!!! Share your thoughts, experiences, and stories behind the art. I'm calling the cops! (Luna gasps) You all dont quite grasp the concept! We should thought about it ourselves before jumping to a preposterous conclusion that you were bad luck. Lynn Sr. bit his lip for a moment, rubbed the back of his head with hand, and then sighed, "It might take a while and it might not be easy, but I'm certain we can regain their trust." Upload stories, poems, character descriptions & more. Ronnie Anne: [Sighs] The softball game she accused Lincoln of being bad lack was on Friday the 13th. We're already hanging on a thread as it is! This made the officer raise an eyebrow, not fully believing them. You overreact to everything! Theres nothing lucky about it! Rita: Honey! (to the viewers) "Now if you'll excuse me, I'm gonna have some fun with my family." Start talking. I don't want to pick a movie you guys possiblyly won't enjoy, I want to watch something all of us will enjoy." If you didn't show up, I don't want to think about what would've happened." We said we were sorry. Pulling out his walkie talkie, he said, "This is Hotel Officer Mooresfield. She's trying to say she was wrong, but her mouth is pathologically incapable of saying those words. Luna put. "And mom should know better," Lori shouted back, glaring at her mother specifically, "Then to take us to that woman!" Lynn Sr: We promise to never do it again! Don't fight now! Lock 'n' Loud / The Whole Picture. Incredible from The Incredibles on the cover. ", Mascot:[in a familiar voice] "Hey, man! "YOU KIDS ARE NOTHING BUT TROUBLE AND TO BE HONEST, I WAS GLAD WHEN YOUR PARENTS DECIDED TO TAKE YOU TO THAT HOTEL BECAUSE I COULDN'T STAND THE THOUGHT OF BEING STUCK WITH YOU MONSTERS FOR TWO DAYS!" Leni: Linky, dont shout. NOBODY!!! I am an 11 year old boy, not some object to be pushed away and than used! Just so you know, in case you ask about that). I can't believe I told him to back away from his own home! "Hi, Aunt Ruth," Lola said, in a fake sweet tone, "it's your niece Rita's kids." The last one he is shown reading has the Ninja Steel Rangers from Power Rangers Ninja Steel on the cover. He quickly throws the squirrel suit into a rubbish bin.). Lisa responded with in her genius talk. My last one just got messed up and i wish to make one properly. WE MAKE EVERYTHING WORSE!!! ", Rita: "And tomorrow, we're going to the beach." Lincoln: "Did anything bad happen, something life threatening that I would be deemed 'bad luck'? Well thanks [Sam then kissed Luna on the cheek. Ruth said, curious to where this was going. ", Baseball Announcer: "I think you're rubbing off on me, Pep. Leni: (sniffles) I miss him so bad. What's going on here?! Although it does teach us a good moral about it not being an easy road (but its worth it), some of the stuff involved does feel a bit out of place (like the disowning part by Ruth). Lincoln said, as tears started forming in his eyes. Lincoln: (with angry tears) I'm throwing this stupid, disgusting thing away! I'm the Duke! "Not until tomorrow," Lincoln replied, confused as to why he was asking this. (Lincoln is sitting on the back porch while his family is at the game, looking pretty mad. ", (and that did it. Lincoln: I don't believe it! QUIET! Felix turned to the clock on the wall, it was almost 1 in the afternoon, why were these kids still in a room they were supposed to have been long gone from. And with that the family walked out of the spa, the kids still angry and upset and the parents ashamed and disappointed in themselves. Lucy: Lincoln's right! Lynn: (coughs) You know, if I knew that my superstitions would make Lincoln disown us I never would have started this nonsense in the first place. Kick the . Rita: You're all just angry with each other, when we get home, we'll talk about this properly. Are you saying that our parents are responsible getting us kicked out?" Leni: Linky, if you didnt want to come to my fashion show, you just had to say so! I can't even begin to imagine what they'll do their parents when they find them.'. "Uuhhh," Luna started, unsure of how to start the conversation, "Hello, security dude. Lincoln: Lucy! ", Lucy: "After all, it's not like we always go to each others events 100% of the time, so why should you? Lola: You mean you dont want to support us anymore? Lincoln: You are a stupid bully, a coward, a nobody, a freak, a lamebrain, a beast and the worst sister ever AND THAT'S THAT!!!! I hate that you do nothing but ruin other people's lives, including one of your own! Honestly, while Rita still a little sad that her dear aunt disowned her and her family, she thought it was for the best, if Ruth felt it was right to call her children monsters then that wasn't someone she wanted her family to be around. Lynn ran outside and falcon punched him. "They have a point there honey," Lynn Sr. said, before immediately clasping his mouth shut, his wife glaring at him for saying that. So we've been in here trying to pass the time. Lincoln: (to the viewers) "Well, looks like everyone learned something. Project Loud House; Ties That Bind; It's a Loud, Loud, Loud, Loud, House; Toads and Tiaras; . I ADMIT IT!!! I hate gator wrestling! ", [Margo takes a swing and flings herself into the umpire and the bat hits her helmet. Lincoln finally got through to them, but he didn't feel happy about seeing them cry, he knew he was still partly to blame), Leni: (with a broken voice) "What have we done?! ", Lynn Sr.: (with a broken voice) "And we were horrible parents to you, locking you out! I don't want this stupid bunch of brats in my life anymore! Felix looked at the door and saw a number 5 on it. Which she did. (The family screams in horror. I demand an explanation! I guess this proves it! SQUIRRELS WIN! I don't even care about that anymore. And even if you don't always succeed, your a good at it. Find out what other deviants think - about anything at all. Lynn Sr.: He wrecked our trophy case to!? Those honors go to Nickelodeon, Teletoon, Chris Savino, Stephen Hillenberg, John A. Davis, Louis Sachar and Gold Cartoonist (who is located on fanfiction). With that, the parents just held each other for the remainder of the night, promising to do whatever it took to earn back their children's trust. My coffin. (He picks up the squirrel suit, jumps up and down on the head and starts ripping the chest)", Lynn: HEY! Head Poet's Anxiety alt scene12. Lincoln: FIIIIIIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNNEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It was created for a St. Patrick's Day episode, but flopped hard. +7 more. Leni: Like, I don't like it here anymore either! The entire lobby was destroyed, couches were stomped beyond recognition, lamps and desks were thrown and broken, hotel luggage carts were somehow damaged beyond repair and some people were hurt (another author interruption sorry: not severely, mind you, but enough that they were going to feel pain tomorrow and the next few days). "YOU THINK I ENJOY BEING VISITIED BY YOU LITTLE MONSTERS?! Trying explaining that!" Can you check on the computer and see who's staying in this room." Upload stories, poems, character descriptions & more. No such luck alt ending5. "As grateful as I am that I saved you from making a dangerous decision," the man said, his tone getting lighter for a moment before returning to a serious tone, "I'm afraid that doesn't do much to the amount of trouble you're all in.". Ive covered for you guys, ive done you all favours, ive gotten you out of trouble, ive spent time with you and this is how you all repay me!?!? [shows the score: Hazeltuck Lions: 3, Royal Woods Squirrels: nothing.] Lincoln Loud, the middle child of the family, was brought to his older sister's baseball league from his own will. [The softball playoffs. It was never fun but I'm glad it's over." "No," Lynn Sr. and Rita responded with, not liking where this was going. Lincoln: Which is why Im making you all wear squirrel suits for the rest of your lives, [They all gulp. Would you mind me speaking to Angus for a bit? Literature. Rita: Kids, your friends are here. UPDATE: 20/04/2018- the next chapter has been written I just need to correct some thing's from this chapter. Upload stories, poems, character descriptions & more. Find out what other deviants think - about anything at all. The moment she said that, Lynn Sr. and Rita's faces became shocked with horror, their kids knew about what they did and that they got kicked out because of it. Fool Me Twice extended ending10. Things were starting to get intense in the Loud family hotel room. Luna, Luan, Lola and Lisa were battling off against three obnoxious hotel guests that made all of them look like saints. He managed to, but with a twist. They knew that whatever they were going to tell Aunt Ruth, it wasn't going to be good. I do not own Loud House, Spongebob Squarepants, The Adventures of Jimmy Neutron, Wayside or Loud House Tales. Lynn: Stop being such a baby and just put that suit back on! I need a very big, long rest from them. Especially Lynn. "And just remember," Lori said, and then she and her siblings yelled one last time, "WE HATE YOU!" This is also a parody fanfiction that is based on Spongebob Squarepants' episode 'Hall Monitor,' The Adventures of Jimmy Neutron's episode 'Hall Monster,' Wayside's episode 'Safety Monitor,' it is also based on a chapter from Loud House Tales that was called 'Hall Monitor,' however that is no longer up for some reason, and Lynn Loud Jr. being a hall monitor in the Loud House season 5 episode 'Schooled!' Lincoln returns the hug, rubbing her back), Lynn: "No, it'sNOT okay! *Cries* It's going to take me days to fix this baby! If you dont want to wear the squirrel costume, dont wear it. No Such Luck - Lucky Carol by TriassicLane Cartoons Comics Funny Comics Loud House Rule 34 The Loud House Lincoln The Loud House Fanart Loud House Characters Funny Comic Strips Movies Coming Out Sonic And Amy More information . Everyone finally realized that what they've done. I hate that you don't love me anymore! Nobody wanted to answer, but they knew things would get uglier if they didn't, so, Luna made the decision to walk slowly to the door and open it just enough to see who's out there but not to let them in. Ruth responded back, clearly mad too. Lynn: HUH!?!?! (yet another author interruption: the three obnoxious guys' characters are based on some of the staff that are/were working on the show at the time this episode first premiered, which is what the show did when they made this episode canon, I kept their first names but gave them new last names. Youve ruined my life and made me look like a melting snow cone!! INT-LOUD HOUSE-LINCOLN'S ROOM (Lincoln and Lucy have just finished reading the new homemade comic that she made for him.) WE'RE BRUTES!!! The Loud House Re-write #1-No Such Luck Add to Favourites By jgodzilla1212 Watch Published: May 10, 2020 75 Favourites 101 Comments 31K Views (It begins right after Lincoln tells Lily why he can't attend to Lily's play date and he bumps into Lisa) Lisa: >scoffing< Pshaw, There's no such thing as bad luck, there's only science, all else is hooey. Just a heads up, there are moments of severe anger and shouting, so if you don't like either of these then I'd recommend reading something else. Lucy said, as the siblings once again glared at their parents with anger. "Yeah they did," Luan responded with. Did anything life threatening happen? Did anything bad ever happen at your concerts with me there? Wow, Lincoln, I'm really sorry. Everyone in the room went silent, stood still, afraid to make a move or a noise. (Previously on The Loud House. Lincoln: I said NO! Angus: (surprised by the question) Oh my. ", Lincoln: "Just hear me out." Lincoln: "Thanks, Ms. Mulligan. Lincoln yelled, "WE HATE YOU!" After she did, Leni didn't get angry, but she did get upset, very upset at her parents. And it wasn't just her, everyone in the lobby felt it and they looked around, wondering if there was an unexplainable earthquake coming. They knew their kids wouldn't like that but this was supposed to be a weekend for themselves, not the family, and the kids should've just accepted it and gone to Ruth's. luckily, it was unlocked, he opened it and went inside.) And with that, Felix fell unconscious, thinking about what kind of damage those kids would do in their anger. You're supposed to be grounded to the hotel room, remember?" Rita got up from her seat and said, "Kids, let me explain" "Explain what?!" except in this story, the family never believed that he was bad luck in the first place. Turning to the siblings, he asked, "When are supposed to leave?" Also please don't flame me. "Aunt Ruth," Rita said, trying to stop the kids from doing something they'd regret, "hang up the phone." "But, as usual," Lincoln added, walking towards his parents, "We didn't and as a result you got angry and grounded us." I'll keep it between the both of us. She playfully rolled her eyes. ", Lola: (with a sad look on her face) "No. Angus: Oh do tell. Now our only brother doesn't want us anymore. "SAVE IT, RITA!" I hate the fact that I was ever related to you monsters! (They smile, Rita comes over to hug him and rest of them except Lynnjoin in for a group hug. It's not me who's the problem, it's you and your stubborn nature. Our family wouldn't be a family without-. I loved it. The Princess and the Everlasting Emerald: A Royal Woods Fairytale. (Tears up) Our only bro. Just tell us and well let you skip it. "Yeah, we literally got kicked out of the room," Lori started with, also angry, "BECAUSE OF YOU!!!" The family think Lincoln is bad luck so they ban him from attending their activities.. Synopsis. He crawls over to the kitchen sink and drinks deeply.). YOU ROCKED IT, LYNN-SANITY! He had a glare on his face and he was tapping his foot on the ground repetitively, showing that he was serious. [In stepped David, Winston, Skippy, Silas, Paige, Francisco, Benny, Sam, Chaz, and Bobby. Luna, Luan, Lola and Lisa were just about ready to ram these three rude jerks with the couch in the room. We know you are!". Tell the community what's on your mind. Lincoln blushed and hugged Ronnie Anne.
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